Siddhartha’s Experience in America
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We started on our journey to what is called a gun range I told him. I hoped that he would like it because I don’t think that they believe in guns so I was hoping that he wouldn’t be offended. He said, “Gun range, I don’t know that that is”. I explained to him all about it a told him how to hold the gun and what not to do with the guns. He said “I am up for anything, I am here to try new things”. We arrived to the range about 20 minuets later. As we got out of the car I pulled the guns out of the back. They were still in their cases but are still very intimidating. Siddhartha was acting skidish. “Siddhartha would you mind taking out one of the guns please?”. He unzipped the case and pulled out the gun. He laid in down in the right direction as I told him in the car. I thought to my self how smart he was even under these circumstances. He asked what type of guns we were going to shoot. I said “we are going to use a 20 gauge shotgun, a 12 gauge shotgun, and a .22 rifle” I told him that the 12 gauge was the most powerful and then the .22 was the least powerful. We started him out on the .22. It shoots like a bb gun with no recoil. He squeezed the trigger slowly and the firing pin hit the primer and the bullet flew towards the target. He jumped from the sound. He said that his heart was pounding and he liked it so far. I then brought out the 20 gauge which was a lot more powerful than the .22 but now as powerful as the 12. He fired the 20 gauge and said “WOW, that’s insane”. We talked about how he liked it so far and he said that was enjoying this more then meditating. We took a short break so that he could calm his heart rate. The smell of gunpowder filled the air. H got back up and walked towards the guns. He wanted to shoot the 12 gauge he said. I put a round in the chamber and slid the hammer forward. I told him to hold on very tight because this is going to have a kick to it. he slowly squeezed the trigger and the gun sounded. he sat there for a minuet and didn't move.
I walked over to him to see if he was ok. His body was moving in the action that he was crying. I asked him if he was ok and he lifted his head laughing his head off. We both laughed for a while with no words. Siddhartha and i went back to the cottage where his plane was waiting. "Siddhartha I enjoyed our journey together. If you ever want to come back to America just tell me". "I will enjoy that very much" he said. His plane flew of into the distance and diapered. our journey was over and back to my life I went.
1)I want them to see that siddhartha is doing what what he does back home and I am teaching him new exciting things in America.
ReplyDelete2)It was easy coming up with the stories because I have done all the things that were in the story. Shooting guns and having a relaxing day in New Hampshire.
3)It was difficult trying to come up with conversation between me and siddhartha.
4)I would like help to know if i repeated my self to much.
The essay is brilliant. However do a quick spell check on all of your words. There's one point where you wrote close and you meant clothes. However it is nowhere near distracting and I like the way your essay flows. Thumbs up bro! :D -Jake Brouillette
ReplyDeleteI liked your essay because I think shooting guns is something different to picture Siddhartha doing. I don't think you were repetitive, your imagery was very good.
ReplyDeletekurt I loved your essay. Everything was very clear and fluent. I like the places you chose to take siddhartha to, It seems like he also enjoyed it.
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