Great Gatsby (Daisy Buchanan)
The setting of the storie is in a small town called Odessa TX. its about a day on the town when a blind date goes wrong.
One Monday morning in a little town called,
They met at a little place in the town. Daisy asked Boobie if he drinks and Boobie says “no I am still in high school and I can get kicked off the football team if I am caught drinking and I am not going to take that risk” she doesn’t know what to say because where she comes from, they always have party’s and drink even when its illegal. She is involved with prohibition.
They chit chat for a while and have a few sodas because Boobie wont drink anything. They talk and talk and they really got to know each other. Boobie asks daisy if she like football and she said that “I love that game”. He tells her that she needs to come see one of his games and hang out after.
They departed that day and went their separate ways but kept in touch by texting. Later that night daisy called him and she was very drunk and asked Boobie if he could come get her at the bar. He wanted to make good impression on her so he went. On his was into the bar to get her his coach drove by and saw him walk in. Daisy buys Boobie a drink and all the people there think he is 21 so he decides that know one will find out so he goes for it.
After a few more drinks he and daisy decide to leave but daisy asks to drive. She climbs into the driver side door and takes off. She has been known for her reckless driving because she hit someone and killed them. Boobie asks her if she has her license and she replies “NO”, and all of a sudden (smash) they get hit by a car and Boobie flies out the window because he wasn’t wearing his seatbelt.
The crash was horrific ambulances and fire trucks were all there. Boobie was taken by an ambulance to a near by hospital.. His family and coaches and teammates all met him at the hospital. He had a broken leg and 4 broken ribs. Daisy came into the room drunk and started yelling at everyone and she said to the coach “were just drunk its not anything bad so chill out” the biggest game ever was tomorrow and the team was missing their MVP. Boobie was kicked off the football team and was never to play football again because of his leg.
i liked how you brought the characters together
ReplyDeleteI think your essays thesis is clear and it interested me and brought me into the story. The part of the essay that was most interesting to me was when he went into the bar and then got into the car accident. I think you did the dialogue very nicely, i felt as though i was right there listening to the conversation. I don't have much advice to give you because your essay was very good, the only thing would be is to re read your essay to make sure your sentences are clear.
ReplyDeleteyour essay was good, and i thought you did a great job bringing in aspect from both characters into it
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